2gether

By Angelz cry 2

Good to die when
you cant take nomore
and your alone and
alive. Embrass the dark
and the light... let
them combine and make
a pat and go
to a brighter and darker
place called the in-between
and live as one
and die separate and
fight as 2 or none

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Copyright 2011 Angelz cry 2
Published on Monday, July 25, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Monday, July 25, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    A battle within... I have a few... But that would take up more comment space than allowed...lol... Roam around, read and read and post... I'll be back to visit ya! Scholar

  • Angelz cry 2 On Monday, July 25, 2011, Angelz cry 2 (16)By person wrote:

    Thank u lol am i good or amateur? if i may ask

  • Devilish On Monday, July 25, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Your a good amatuer... kidding sweety... I believe that you got what it takes to be great. Follow your FIRST mind, and don't stray from it! Let your mind release EXACTLY whats on it... Don't question your work if what you've wrote is excatly what your feeling!! Brutal honesty and being shamless with a little bite of rage or anger makes for the best poetry... Off to a great start... Scholar

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