2gether
By Angelz cry 2
Good to die when
you cant take nomore
and your alone and
alive. Embrass the dark
and the light... let
them combine and
make
a pat and go
to a brighter and darker
place called
the in-between
and live as one
and die separate and
fight
as 2 or none
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Copyright 2011 Angelz cry 2
Published on Monday, July 25, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, July 25, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
A battle within... I have a few... But that would take up more comment space than allowed...lol... Roam around, read and read and post... I'll be back to visit ya!
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On Monday, July 25, 2011, Angelz cry 2
(16) wrote:
Thank u lol am i good or amateur? if i may ask
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On Monday, July 25, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Your a good amatuer... kidding sweety... I believe that you got what it takes to be great. Follow your FIRST mind, and don't stray from it! Let your mind release EXACTLY whats on it... Don't question your work if what you've wrote is excatly what your feeling!! Brutal honesty and being shamless with a little bite of rage or anger makes for the best poetry... Off to a great start...