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Going to hell
By Noztic
Looking me in the eyes,
Smiling is your disguise.
As this the
time flies,
It hit me by surprise.
You came out with those
lies,
So easily and fluidly through your teeth.
I am sitting
here with all these whys,
While I am struggling to breath.
You were the one I trusted,
Never knew you to do any wrong.
But
I have been thrusted,
Been lied to for so long.
Now I lay
here crying,
Feeling used and hurt.
Always repeating my saying,
That you will soon be burnt.
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Copyright 2011 Noztic
Comments on "Going to hell"
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A former member wrote:
i feel the anger and or hurt in this one... it's like the unexpected happened... and now its time for the depression
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A former member wrote:
I love angry poems hehe. I think this one is my favorite so far
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On Sunday, July 3, 2011, LadyNovella
(18)
wrote:
when you let someone close, you give them the power to hurt you, to betray you. and yet, you cannot go through life without letting anyone close. you can only hope that they will someday hurt more than they have hurt you. this is petty, perhaps, maybe even shameful. but it is in our nature to want those who hurt us to feel such pain, to suffer for all they have done. this piece depicts all this thruth clearly, precisely, and perfectly. well done :)
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On Sunday, July 3, 2011, Noztic
(11) wrote:
Thank you very much for your support. It is greatly appreciated and accepted.
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A former member wrote:
agreed. karma works wonders. great write :)
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On Saturday, July 2, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Yes indeed... Theres' always a price to pay for hurting someone...
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