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Bleeding Within
By Liquid_Chaos87
Take another piece of
me
And take another slice,
But how much longer
Until I pay the ultimate price?
My mind
is more than weary
My body completely numb.
I even look into
the mirror
Only to see what I’ve become.
I look to the stars to find myself
As something inside of
me dies.
I look for clues under my soul
With endless cries, I
hear no replies.
My anticipation has died
underneath
And my hollow soul crumbles down.
I feel the blame,
the fingers point
Suffocating inside and left to drown.
The profound pain too much to bear
With my conscience
never being clear.
Dripping with sorrow, I’m torn within
Releasing
the anguish with every fear.
Scattered tears relentlessly fall
With nothing left to bleed inside.
I look to the stars one more
time
But behind the clouds they hide.
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Copyright 2010 Liquid_Chaos87
Comments on "Bleeding Within"
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A former member wrote:
your writing style and how you captured the emotion kinda reminded me a little of my own. this was slightly elusive as to why you felt like this but still a good write.
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On Saturday, October 16, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(872)
wrote:
A great first post, not many images are more sorrowful and hopeless than looking to the stars only to find nothing. The pain seeped in between every word. Thanks for sharing, write on.
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