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Final Words
By Daryl Bracken
Win ter time to sleep
De mons eat ing at my soul
I pull the trig ger
Yes I know Not a true Haiku, It fits the rules. As far as I can tell
Maybe I should have called it Cabin Fever.
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Copyright 2010 Daryl Bracken
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On Thursday, July 28, 2011, Ladyhawke
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wrote:
the point is still there, and i like the way you worded it. It still has a mysterious feel to it that haiku has. I liked it. . .
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Dilated View
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I like the cabin fever reference you mention in the note. I know those emotions well. A very harsh finality to this, thank you for sharing.
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