Zombie Man
By DarkPaladine
The zombie man is a person that I would not like to meet. He drinks
the blood of the dead,their bodies he likes to eat.
He
cuts them up with his saw or nails them to the floor. They are eaiser to
keep this way and can't go running to the door.
The zombie man is not that fast sometimes he is very slow. It's not
that he is old, But his body is full of rot and mold.
To hit him in the head is sure to bring a kill. But if you were to
do that ,you would take away the thrill. The Zombie man lives in a place
that is full of muck and mire. And if you go through the swamp at night
his eyes might look like two small fires.
The Zombie man is not pretty, he is as ugly as can be.And if you ask
him to smile you will see his rotten teeth.
You will be amazed to find that he is not alone.After all at the end of
the day, We always take him home. The Zombie lives in all of us,our
hate and rage is his. The Zombie is our own uglyness that lives deep
within.
So the next time when your asleep and you hear a thump in the dark. Do
not be afraid it is the Zombie after your heart.
Comments on "Zombie Man"
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A former member wrote:
Damn nice write man. Don't wait so long to bring us another. :)
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, Dark Valkyrie
(11) wrote:
The Zombie within us !!!! Nice creativity !!! Witty and dark !!!
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2010, DarkPaladine
(15) wrote:
Dark Valkyrie. Thank you for your kind words. I have read some of your poems and I really liked Stranded on a Scare. We all have a scar that life has given us wheather its inside or out we all have them. Very good poem
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
Very creative piece DP, you embodied everything the zombie man is in this write. WHile reading this I thought about Jason from he series Friday the 13th. Also I thought that the structure made sence cause the zombie man could be anywhere at any given time so you also did a great job with that. Thank you for sharing this piece with us here on DP =)
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2010, DarkPaladine
(15) wrote:
Thank you for your kind words. Yes the Zombie is in us all and it sits their and waits to be released. We all try to pretend that he does not live in me but he does. Watch him appear when someone cuts you off in traffic. Or spills something on you at a party.