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HER
By Daryl Bracken
Her words spoke of love
Her actions spoke of loneliness
Her
body spoke of desire
Her touch spoke of lust
Her Eyes reviled
the lies
Her love a game
Her loneliness was true
Her
desire was revenge
Her lust was for suffering
Her lies reviled
the pain
Her game to spark your feelings
Her true Loneliness
the bait
Her revenge to fuel the fire
Her suffering a link
to life
Her pain was hers alone
Her Feelings are not of Love
Her Bait eats at her Heart
Her fire consumes her soul
Her
life is much like Death
Her being alone is her own doing
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Copyright 2010 Daryl Bracken
Published on Sunday, June 27, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
This poem was Published in Sunflowers and Seashells Passages ( on page 205) I got one in a bookComments on "HER"
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A former member wrote:
woah. fantastic write
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On Sunday, July 11, 2010, NikesRain
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wrote:
the way this was formed/styled, as ALWY stated, was extremely clever... each stanza taking on more weight, gaining feel with a final line hammer blow.... nicely done
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On Monday, June 28, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
excellent, i loved what you done here, very clever and all around just a great write
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