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beaten and bruised
By firecracker
unbreakable i thought no i was wrong
you broke me down
beat
me down
i felt lower than low
loved by none, hated by many, liked
by few
forgotten locked away
forgot what sunlight looked like
never did i think id see the outside again
felt so alone no one
knew my secret
kept from the world my bruises, locked and hiden from
my family
cryin beggin him please not again
what could i do were
would i run
the blood from my face hits the floor i need to make a
stand
i cant take much more
he said he loved me
is that
love? if so then i never want love again
broken wrists bruised ribs
choked again
what i have i done im sorry
must have been my fault
to deserve those things
but still i must escapse....
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A former member wrote:
excellent write... I can feel the pain pouring out of this piece... Its not love my dear.. far from it... Write on....
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On Thursday, May 13, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810)
wrote:
very cool, well done... good emotional content... I am going to throw some Ideas at you because you have the talent... change no to but, 1st line... run your pieces through a spell checker... example, escapse... you do good work, write on
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A former member wrote:
when i read this ... i feel so much rage on those f*#kin ass freaks out there .. who just need to know how its like being the other side ... no one should be treated like that ... gr8 write u got me
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