A Chance To Say Goodbye

By Elf

This is somewhat of a sequel to "I Should Have Said."

as I looked out the window of the car,
as the houses flew by,
I missed you,
as the car pulled up into the parking lot,
I wanted to speak to you,
I still curse myself for my mistake,
as I step out of the car, I look up,
I see you face,
a chance to fix my mistake,
shall I be able to speak up this time?
shall I be able to say what i feel?
don't let me be seperated from you again,
I must, this time,
at least say "goodbye."

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Copyright 2003 Elf
Published on Saturday, May 31, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Elf On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    thank you to everyone

  • A former member wrote: Yay! Wonderful goodness! I love it! *hug* Are you talking about any one in particular? Smashingly good! *applauds*

  • Elf On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    yes...*bows*

  • Elf On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    the "yes" was answering your question

  • Elf On Saturday, May 31, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    house in the second line should be houses.

  • Elf On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf (47)By person wrote:

    i turned the house into houses, so ignore that comment.

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, May 31, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    i like it. goodbyes are good to say

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