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A Chance To Say Goodbye
By Elf
This is somewhat of a sequel to "I Should Have Said."
as I looked out the window of the car,
as the houses flew by,
I missed you,
as the car pulled up into the parking lot,
I wanted to speak to you,
I still curse myself for my mistake,
as I step out of the car, I look up,
I see you face,
a chance to fix my mistake,
shall I be able to speak up this time?
shall I be able to say what i feel?
don't let me be seperated from you again,
I must, this time,
at least say "goodbye."
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Copyright 2003 Elf
Published on Saturday, May 31, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Chance To Say Goodbye"
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On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf
(47)
wrote:
thank you to everyone
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A former member wrote:
Yay! Wonderful goodness! I love it! *hug* Are you talking about any one in particular? Smashingly good! *applauds*
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On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf
(47) wrote:
yes...*bows*
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On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf
(47) wrote:
the "yes" was answering your question
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On Saturday, May 31, 2003, Elf
(47) wrote:
house in the second line should be houses.
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On Sunday, June 1, 2003, Elf
(47) wrote:
i turned the house into houses, so ignore that comment.
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On Saturday, May 31, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
i like it. goodbyes are good to say
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