Soul Screaming
By Moonflower
Standing on the edge, His eyes are filled with
the torrential
epiphany of false inclinations
Hollow,
they speak out in frigid
incapacitation
and his skin is like stretched leather,
the binding too tight,
scraping against fragile bones and
pulsing
veins
His chest quickens,
like a startled serpent as he inhales with a spine cringing
whoosh
And you see the raw fear, like
a rabbit
in the jaws of a vicious coyote
Some thing is chewing
on his heart
as he coughs up the bile of his own decaying
flesh
He rasps and shutters, Inclining his neck for the
long drawl of
soul emptying oblivion
And like a mangy, tattered and hungry
wolf
He howls with intense anguish, the sorrow flows
out with
accumulating horror
He bares his being on the dust of empty
trails
Tomorrows racing past as the smoke rolls
and he feels
the flames on his neck
like satan's beckoning call
He
wails, Like a thousand hearts ache and pulse
in a perfect resonance
The trees break and crumble
as those hollow eyes
open wider
and wider,
the O of his mouth accentuates
..and the Scream
pervades...
Author's Note:
Inspired by the paintingComments on "Soul Screaming"
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A former member wrote:
Wow! That was mindblowing! Such detailed imagery and well chosen words, the picture described just paints in my mind so beautifully. Masterful!!
Sincerely,
Darkys Black
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On Friday, March 5, 2010, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
this painted a nice portrait of fear and despair. very vivid
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A former member wrote:
forever haunting, the imagery frighteningly precise... a scene of true apocalyptic proportions.
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On Wednesday, August 11, 2010, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
thank you. i love your comments :) lol