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Unknow
By firecracker
The unknown visions waste away where those forgotten lonely strange sorrows
are again crystallized
Desire conjures which is worthwhile and found
One lonely futile human cry following a haunting shiver now very long
Anguish ascends upon a fragile spirit
As im called to death no life,
love, and all knowing plunges to an end
That is my very ending
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Copyright 2010 firecracker
Published on Thursday, January 28, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, January 31, 2010, theXkevorkian
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wrote:
I do not agree I do not feel any words are lost or missing .... It is abstract and raw and leaves a lil for the imagination ... Nice Work Welcome to DP .... Write Oh :)
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On Thursday, January 28, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
Your subject was very good. Although your attempt to put it into words ended up on the short end. It was a difficult read because you forgot words. Example: Desire conjures that which is worthwhile,,, you forgot 'that' You tend to put a lot of ideas on one line, which is fine, Without the puncuation to seerate them the reader loses the full meaning of what you had to say. I hope you don't think was being hard. I think the talent is there you just need a little help. fix it up and write-on.
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