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The show
By firecracker
Front Seat show
A real life suicide
As she takes center stage
Falls into death but feels no more pain, Watch her fly high into the
sky
So shy as she spins round-n-round
As her heart beats one
last time
Don't interrupt as she reviews memories of what was
She
takes the road to a fiery hell
Far away from the pain they all made
Hey she'll never tell
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Copyright 2010 firecracker
Author's Note:
Just somethign i wrote after goign through a lot of hard timesComments on "The show"
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, theXkevorkian
(65)
wrote:
Short piece but I like it .... Captured my attention ... The last line I felt could of used a lil work ... But all and all Excellent write ... Welcome To DP ..... Write On :)
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
nicely done, I enjoyed your use of the english language and the concrete syle . One thing, and its just me, in the second to the last line you made a refrence to "they". Please reply and let me know who they are.
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A former member wrote:
Sad depiction of a life ended to soon. Painful words, but written so well. =)
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