quick and off the cuff

By littleone

He has saved me. 
Taken me, broken and given me hope.
Loved me when I thought he didn't care.
My heart has been so lost, thinking I was lost to him.
Then he reminded me that he remembered what I remembered.
He felt me when I felt him.
He knew I never left him.
Knew that I cared.
Knew that even if everyone abandoned him, I would not.
I am a good slave. 
I saught out help to become a better slave in his absence.
I worked, hoping it was not in vain. 
And when I was in greatest need, he opened my eyes.
He helped me to see I had many people to help me.
He showed me he had not abandon me.
Let me feel his love, his strong hand guides me to my knees where I belong.
In front of him. 
As I will always be, in spirit or physically.
As needed. 
Forever loyal.
Forever doing my best to please him.
Forever in his service.
Forever his little one.

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Copyright 2010 littleone
Published on Tuesday, January 12, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

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Little One
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  • maggot death On Thursday, January 21, 2010, maggot death (62)By person wrote:

    good job! I like your poems, and I hope you write more than this!!

  • Winter Born On Thursday, January 14, 2010, Winter Born (169)By person wrote:

    Not bad at all Little one, though you should change the spelling from vein to vain...one means what you want it to and the other does not...

  • A former member wrote: Nicely done. Welcome to Dp :)

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