Untitled

By muckraker

would you care for some pep
in your camel?
one hump or two?
careful, if you ride him to death,
he's liable to spit goo at you.
but if you treat him gently
and take it nice and slow
then your camel will keep on trekking
and get you where you need to go.

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Copyright 2003 muckraker
Published on Friday, May 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Tuesday, August 22, 2017, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    DUDE! I am completely stoned. You are blowing my mind man. I have to go. Must eat more pudding chips. Have you ever put pudding on a Pringle. JD

  • A former member wrote: SIlly I think, yet maybe there is something more that I cannot see..either way good job!

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, May 23, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    umm ok this is kinda funny. don't mean to laugh if there is a meaning i didn't get. nice write

  • muckraker On Friday, May 23, 2003, muckraker (14)By person wrote:

    hidden meaning? nah...

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