Until then

By Shatterdtearsangl

  Eternal, until my soul is mended
There’s still something very empty and dark left in my soul
a eternal frown
Until it can be mended
In the end still feeling mellow, missing piece, directionless
A empty and lisp of apology was exchanged
In hope something would be felt to fill it in just enough
But still remains a empty eternal frown
Possibilities of light at the end
Possibilities of making things brighter and hopeful
Never seem near
A eternal frown shall remain

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Copyright 2010 Shatterdtearsangl
Published on Sunday, January 3, 2010.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *smiles* an eternal frown. i like that. like one mask over another, who knows what we're really thinking~M

  • Riven Waker On Sunday, January 3, 2010, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    i really enjoyed this piece...:}

  • Dilated View On Sunday, January 3, 2010, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Very sad to wander feeling aimless until you're able to heal and move on. Hope you find that you're able to more quickly than not. Thanks for sharing.

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