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By SeventhCircle
Who could have guessed
Who could have known
That I'd get stuck here all alone
In deeper shadows I must hide
'Til the world can look into my eye
Understanding's just a step away
But it seems they're deaf to all I say
They cannot see
They cannot find
Their lives are forfeit, as is mine
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Copyright 2003 SeventhCircle
Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Friday, May 23, 2003, Demosthenes
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wrote:
this is obcrure, but are you aware that youve commented on NONE of my work? okay, bye. -B
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On Saturday, May 17, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
wow, youre really a lot better than i expected you to be. kudos. -B
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A former member wrote:
I love "Understanding's just a step away But it seems they're deaf to all I say" because it is too true and real.... love thy works but a bit too short for my liking....
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On Thursday, May 15, 2003, SeventhCircle
(22) wrote:
you're right about the shortness, but that's one of my few recurring styles. never written a good poem more than five or six stanzas
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On Thursday, May 15, 2003, Griffin
(114) wrote:
alone is right, great poems
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A former member wrote:
Very good! yay! Thank you for commenting on mine too! I like this!!!
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On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
well done
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A former member wrote:
tramendouse!
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On Monday, September 1, 2003, Jonas
(720) wrote:
huh?
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