I Feel Nothin'

By KuroiBara

I woke up
I woke in the sun
I woke and had fun
I felt glad that I felt somethin'

I ate breakfast
I ate somethin' good
I ate eggs and bacon, really good
I'm glad I ate somethin'

I went to the park
I swung on the swings
I swung high
I swung really high, you know
I'm glad I got to swing somethin'

Then I got high and went home
I felt like there was nothin' there
I really felt there was nothin' there
No pain, no sorry, no joy, no love....nothin'.....

Day after day, thing's go to nothin'
I feel nothin' no more, I feel nothin'
Waiting 'till old reaper comes to get me,
Bet I'll feel somethin'
But day after day, hour after hour, minute after minute,...second after second....
For an eternity, I feel nothin'
I just don't....I just don't.


I just don't.

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© 2009 KuroiBara
Published on Wednesday, February 18, 2009.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • urbanhumility On Thursday, February 19, 2009, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    B.B King and "Lucille" could feel you on this one.....in know i do my friend......well done

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