Nothing.........

By brokenbandagedbetter

your face contorts as the agony courses
want to hold you…you push away
it kills…
rips…
shreds…
to see the pain heaving and pitching
yearn to erase the pain…but…
eradicate the poison that infests you…but…
I’m no hypnotist…magician…nothing

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© 2008 brokenbandagedbetter
Published on Wednesday, November 12, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This poem is weird, oddly written and the last sentence doesn't make much sense! I like it! You got your feelings out there and in your own way. Ok, it's not the most conventional poem but heck, it's filled with emotion and pulls you in, isn't that what a poems supposed to be? Please keep writing.

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