autumn leaves.

By saudade

i think of you & all of
a sudden
my thoughts
s c a t t e r
like fa
ll
ing
l a e
e v s
(the wind carries you away)
---the sun is in my eyes,
and i swear i will not forget that
though the blanket of leaves
on the ground looks
so warm&inviting
,they are nothing but the
remnants
of dying trees;
a semi-rainbow of redorangeyellowgreen
will not stop the poor leaves
from (witheringfadinggasping)
being
crushed.

& my heart is like an autumn leaf

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© 2008 Therese Tiongson
Published on Wednesday, October 22, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, November 1, 2008, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    This was fabulously written heartbreak piece. Bravinski! :) -Carl

  • A former member wrote: Oh! Bravo. Truly was it a pleasure the reading of this.

  • saudade On Saturday, October 25, 2008, saudade (6)By person wrote:

    thanks you! i'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

  • saudade On Saturday, October 25, 2008, saudade (6)By person wrote:

    more like, thank you. XD

  • Leith Plunkett On Friday, October 24, 2008, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    I love poems that make me see things in a different light. This certainly made me see autumn differently. I loved this piece.

  • saudade On Saturday, October 25, 2008, saudade (6)By person wrote:

    thank you so much! i'm happy to have changed the way you see autumn. :D

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