Aerophile Pedophile

By longlivetheaged

Allegedly
the aging aged
tires agedly

His lover, 13
sung a sang
while he sinking sank

Watching her
flower
in an aphid garden

So young
and already
ruined

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© 2008 longlivetheaged
Published on Tuesday, October 7, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, October 10, 2008, carlosjackal (3018)By person wrote:

    Shockingly good. -Carl

  • longlivetheaged On Friday, October 10, 2008, longlivetheaged (8)By person wrote:

    Hardly evolve! I'm constantly floored by the talent I've found on this site! Loved 'To break as a violin breaks' :)

  • A former member wrote: You're making everyone else look bad by comparison.

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, October 8, 2008, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    This is crazy. Hahah. "sung a sang" I freagin love it. Write on.

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