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Wanton Sickness
By nuclearentrails
I cry for you like a colicky baby
Out of some wanton sickness
Because I am a woman that has barely
Learned to care for herself after
These many hard earned years, too long now
and I long for your touch after but an hour
I love you and desperately and am
Inescapably needy, ready to open and
Compassionately care
I cry for you
My organs seeping eggs and semen
and weeping, I am a feminine mess.
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© 2008 nuclearentrails
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On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View
(583)
wrote:
Raw emotion and truth just kind of grabs you and sucks you in. I can appreciate that you were able to form into words what might seem like a internal cartoon cat fight. Nicely done.
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On Friday, October 3, 2008, disposable
(105) wrote:
like holding a mirror on the first part, then made me feel glad it really wasnt me. beautiful, raw, vulnerable and appreciated :0)
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A former member wrote:
gawds. .. amen. .. .. need as disease nearly; psychotropic and pseudo.fixated.......
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On Thursday, October 2, 2008, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
wow...incredibly visual ending. "My organs seeping eggs and semen ..." especially that line. loved it. :)
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On Thursday, October 2, 2008, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Makes you feel like you've got an itch while you're reading. Desperate, and compulsive. Dig it. Last lines are incredibly powerful. Write the hell on.
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