Please Come To Me

By Rebel_Angel

When everything seems like it is falling apart,
I think of you,
Think of your arms wrapped tightly around me,
Then you whisper in my ear,
I have nothing to fear,
That it will all be over soon,
And everything will be back to normal,
How you will always be there for me & never let go,
But these are all thoughts I long to be true,
When my world falls apart I'm in it alone,
You are not there,
Your with someone else not even thinking of me,
I long for you to be here,
To hold me in your arms,
I feel so safe and carefree,
If only you could be here

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Published on Friday, May 9, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on " Please Come To Me"

A former member wrote: the saddest part about this to me is the last line... and that fact that they almost always can be... it's there choosing not to that should hurt the most
A former member wrote: sniff...i can't stop imagining him coming to get me... and then suddenly i remember that he won't, that he's with her =(. I loved this one, not only the subject matter... it also flows very well. Good job!
On Saturday, August 9, 2003, Abbyernathie (61) wrote:

great job. i really like this one. i really like the language u used to write this.
On Thursday, July 31, 2003, ColdScaredAlone (77) wrote:

aw, this is so sad, and so good!
On Friday, July 18, 2003, _Andrew_ (245) wrote:

beutiful piece, agen i feel i can relate, and yet i feel that i can't go back *~*aNDReW*~*
On Thursday, June 26, 2003, The_Scavenger (30) wrote:

great write nae. remember your friends will catch you when you fall. I know Aurora and I will
On Saturday, June 14, 2003, diavolessa (207) wrote:

having someone that makes you feel safe is such a blessing, cherish it for as long as you can!
On Saturday, June 14, 2003, manywalks (747) wrote:

This was lovely. ~ mw
On Saturday, May 10, 2003, Sky Singer (153) wrote:

again i say -- boys suck. One day, he'll figure it out.... but it will all probably be too late by then. another excellent poem, my dear!
On Sunday, May 11, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

my friend when the waorld falls apart i'll be there if u need me
A former member wrote: You must feel lucky to have someone to love like that- keep writing!!
A former member wrote: the whispers echo an excellent write