Loser

By AnarKoRn

When they look they will just see a friend
Someone there to listen and comprehend
They never see a soul, a mind, a heart
And so they tear my mind apart

Now I will foolishly fall for another
But they will see me like a brother
I'll try to give them my affection
But I'm met with plain rejection

I'm on the wrong end of the noose
I can't even control my moves

Its time to fall again but this one is new
And to her I've always been true
But now the twist is how she'll act
She'll send all my flirtations back

But when confronted with my feelings
She misconstrued our daily dealings
Then off her my love is deflected
I'm alone, once again rejected

I'm on the wrong end of the noose
I can't even control my moves

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© 2008 AnarKoRn
Published on Thursday, July 10, 2008.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Dark Valkyrie On Tuesday, June 29, 2010, Dark Valkyrie (11)By person wrote:

    This is perfectly flawed and twistedly beautiful !! There is only one thing you can do with a noose !!!!

  • A former member wrote: I love the poem.. Makes me think about how I've been calling all my guy friends brothers.. :) great write

  • A former member wrote: yeah..i forgot...i love this poem :D its well writin and shows the emotion really well \

  • A former member wrote: hmm...reminds me of someone i know, they always find love but get fucked over in the end..and there seen as a brother afterwards

  • AnarKoRn On Saturday, July 12, 2008, AnarKoRn (15)By person wrote:

    Thats what love is, happiness for a minute and then disappointment and lonliness... wash rinse and repeat...

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