The Truth about us

By openureyes




i Laugh at the mere suggestion
that there would or ever could be a love comparable to yours
so i go through the motions of life
unaffected by anyone or anything that crosses my path
i silently hope for things that are unspeakable
i quietly walk through this life never giving up that minuscule, almost unrealistic glimmer of hope
i never forgot you
and i could never stop spinning on the love that i have for you



the truth about us is you have removed yourself from this earth



and i am still here



...and now what??

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© 2008 openureyes
Published on Wednesday, June 25, 2008.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Rhys Ki On Monday, July 7, 2008, Rhys Ki (68)By person wrote:

    short and sweet. nicely written work of prose, that is.

  • Mari On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    familiar feeling. rock on

  • blue On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    We share the same internal view. It shall never diminish, never be eclipsed. ~b

  • elisa On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    wow... i'm at a loss.. this is stunningly beautiful.

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