A Party Song

By Pureheartless

party in the battle feild
everyones invited
to this bouncing on slaught
god has incited

i'd take a smile instead
and have people wonder if im dead
you can erase them from the problem
but not from the answer

the proper way
i'll never say
and i cant promise anything

looks like im first from last
looking back into my past

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© 2008 Pureheartless
Published on Wednesday, May 28, 2008.     Filed under: "Political" and "Poetry"
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  • The Lipstick Factor On Thursday, May 29, 2008, The Lipstick Factor (290)By person wrote:

    Wow--this has punch. Love the last two lines of the second stanza!

  • DowngradeBeauty On Wednesday, May 28, 2008, DowngradeBeauty (29)By person wrote:

    (field) I am noticing here a trend with the short and to the gut! Brilliant show Doll!

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