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floating on words
By to love a psycho
If the breath of your words could move me
I would hope to float into the mind
That formed them
Placing them in a specified order to
Create a sentence that is fluid
And easy to understand
Yet able to manipulate itself into a
Series of complex and intricate ideas
I would study the line of thought
Laid out so nicely on the walls of your skull
So instead of staring with a glazed look of
Incomprehension
I could formulate an opinion
And display it to you
With the breath of my own words
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© 2008 to love a psycho
Published on Tuesday, April 22, 2008.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Pretty good and very intelligent but not that dark
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A former member wrote:
Fantastic piece. Great flow and well written. Throughout, from beginning to end, you stayed true to and focused on the subject and idea of your piece, and concluded it with a creative and crafty line that tied everything together perfectly. Excellent job. I love this piece. Keep up the great work!
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On Friday, February 4, 2011, carlosjackal
(2787)
wrote:
What a fucking brilliant piece...The concept and flow were spot on. An underrated poetic treasure.
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2008, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
MMmm.. to crawl amongst their thoughts...strange and occasionally scary territory.. lol.
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A former member wrote:
oh what a great idea! Hmmm, if only saying what we really feel was this easy. so much easier to show than to say. great write.
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