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You won't be able to follow the path my pen lays tonight.
By Armor for your life
Nineteen years and my fists are now open,
yet I naively marvel at their emptiness.
[It's clear]
If I do not hold it then I never had it.
[isn't it]
Speak!
Make known
what is felt,
//for both sides of the axis//
"I can no longer define."
Would this be what they could call love?
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© 2008 Armor for your life
Comments on "You won't be able to follow the path my pen lays tonight."
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On Friday, January 25, 2008, RubyXero
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wrote:
yes. this was brilliant. i loved it. with the mind...the person. conflict. but gesture. lovely.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
Quite nice! My fave work of yours so far, because the content is there, yet your stretching it out...
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Sketso
(416) wrote:
correction, *you're. And... stretching, as in the good sense, i.e. 'meddling with/against the expectation'
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A former member wrote:
yayyyyy. people are experimenting. cheers.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
You continue to amaze me...-Gin
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