Last Moments
By RequiemExMortis
(Note: Try not to judge this one too harshly... I wrote it more than ten
years ago, when I was still a very young high school dropout.)
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Deadly poison seeps in skin,
Toxic venom deep within;
Reaking havoc on your senses,
Poison spreading, blood condenses.
Body and soul, so dizzy, uneven,
Stomach twisting while dry-heaving;
Killer pain inside your head,
Designated to your bed.
Ice-cold sweat and boiling fever,
Rooms keeps spining 'round forever;
Skin ash-grey, eyes bright blue,
Devil's number all through you.
Coughing, hacking... mind distracts,
Read Last Rights, no turning back;
Thoughts cloud up, pain force-fed,
Mind goes black, now you're dead.
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© 2008 RequiemExMortis
Comments on "Last Moments"
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On Sunday, July 16, 2017, worm
(1149) wrote:
goth. black. dark. it read like a black song
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A former member wrote:
reminds of a trully heinous hangover. coincidentally one from 10 years ago.ahhh the memories. ive learned never to get that drunk again. apparently u had a knack for the writing bug then too.
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
nice. pretty creative rhyming words. i liked it...even for 10 years ago. ;)
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A former member wrote:
wicked rhyming..very dark and descriptive.
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A former member wrote:
I thought this was very well done. Great work. I know it must be hard to be a writer.