rain rain

By snow

rain, rain fall again
make me want to play again

run around int the rain
makes me feel plain

so much fun
no more pain

once i play in
the rain

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© 2008 snow
Published on Wednesday, January 9, 2008.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Monday, February 25, 2008, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Face the pain and be set free, fear is the real enemy. Simple message, hard truth. -Carl

  • Niemand On Saturday, January 19, 2008, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    *sighs* I love the rain, you just explained my current mood... Nice write...-Gin

  • snow On Tuesday, January 22, 2008, snow (14)By person wrote:

    thank you. the rain is always fun

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