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He Doesn't See Me
By Argentum
Our lips press together
He doesn't feel me at all
I run my fingers through his hair
But he doesn't notice
When I look him in the eye
He sees through me
When I run my hands over his naked skin
He feels me not at all
We are so similar
Same green eyes
Same chestnut brown hair
Same hopes and dreams
Yet when the words leave my lips
He doesn't hear me speak them
We would be perfect
If only he would notice me
But instead
He turns away from the mirror
Seeing me not at all
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© 2007 Argentum
Published on Friday, December 14, 2007.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "He Doesn't See Me"
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On Friday, December 14, 2007, Sketso
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wrote:
'turns away from the mirror..." SLAM! Nice ending.
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A former member wrote:
i like your take on this with such unreal despair.
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On Friday, December 14, 2007, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
Me likey! This develops very well and in the end drives it's point home with an abrupt ending.
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A former member wrote:
its alittle confusing, b/c at 1st im thinking ur writing about something else then at the end im thinking u r writing about urself. but i still like it. meaningful and all.
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