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Where Are You Now
By BeautyInShadow
Outside is a dark and stormy night,
The lighting flashes, thunders crashes,
The wind blows and the sky pours.
You were my shelter, you were my shield...
Where are you now?
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© 2007 BeautyInShadow
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A former member wrote:
i have felt this.that empty feeling i hate. it brought me back...awesome write..it's short but powerful i like it
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A former member wrote:
take the ("S") off thunders and it will be PERFECT!!! I pictured you screaming on WHERE ARE YOU NOW!][ ][
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A former member wrote:
it's the worst feeling ~Silver~
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On Wednesday, October 3, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246)
wrote:
boom and it ended. nice then again.. i need something more.. *goes to read your other*
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On Saturday, September 22, 2007, toy soldier
(26) wrote:
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A former member wrote:
gone, like everything else good and beautiful. Lost beneath the grime of life's torn moments and a thousand promises never kept. *sighs* Excellent piece...and welcome to dp. ~*Beth*~
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A former member wrote:
awe Aunty I'll keep you warm and frisky;)
lol anyways. this was pretty good i liked your style ..welcome to DP hun
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On Thursday, September 20, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
*lets you borrow the kitty and the flashlight. I just woke up to sheets of light and a strike just behind my place...storms make me frisky or lonely...weird. Welcome to DP
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On Thursday, September 20, 2007, BeautyInShadow
(8) wrote:
Thank you Aunty for your comment...and for the welcome:)
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