her

By sol

she smells a red bouquet
with blue glass manners
when lazy summer
showers
come and say
merry lady
slender so fair
art thou a torment
or a fortune there

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© 2007 sol
Published on Tuesday, September 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • NikesRain On Tuesday, September 18, 2007, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    lovely choice of words and arrangement, graceful, and classic as wonder said......well done

  • A former member wrote: This is a gorgeous snippet of poetic flair. Classic and well-felt. Fine writing you have here. Thoroughly enjoyed. Welcome, indeed.

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