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Empty Promises
By smearedXmakeup
what used to stand with such pride,
now collects dying leaves.
No visitors anymore, completely forgotten.
"Home sweet Home" no longer applies.
you promised, you'd never leave me broken.
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© 2007 Amber Michele [smearedXmakeup]
Published on Thursday, August 16, 2007.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Empty Promises"
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A former member wrote:
ohh that is soo upsetting.
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A former member wrote:
just how i feel..beautiful work
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, Narcissa
(404)
wrote:
It left me sad - good job
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, smearedXmakeup
(19) wrote:
To be completley honest... I was sitting on my back porch and saw a worn down birdhouse. and used it as my inspiration. Although the point was to be emotional yet simple enough that anyone could relate.
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On Thursday, August 16, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
tore me up.... had an ex, i wish i could have said this to.... though its too ambiguous to tell if this is towards family, friends, ex, or anything else... the content still rung true to me.
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