Fuck

By Petra Creffield



I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances I am addicted to mood altering substances fuck…. Petra Creffield 2005

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Published on Tuesday, July 3, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: aptly titled.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, August 18, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    I'm a movie geek. And I am thinking The Shining. I started out with a slight headacke and now it's worse. Also read every word. Love the rings on the picture

  • A former member wrote: brilliant. this is a lot more creative than... "hmm, i'm going to write a poem called writer's block and just leave it blank."Along those lines though. This is more of a painting than a poem. Warhol would be pleased.

  • Petra Creffield On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Petra Creffield (28)By person wrote:

    Thank you, i love Warhol so i'll take it as real compliment - thank you Px

  • thelostmessenger On Sunday, July 29, 2007, thelostmessenger (112)By person wrote:

    i did the same... *giggles* messenger

  • anakronistik_me On Monday, July 16, 2007, anakronistik_me (24)By person wrote:

    i am almost ashamed to say that i actually read the entire thing. every damned word. i too, am addicted to mood altering substances. great write.

  • Err0r On Saturday, July 7, 2007, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    You know they say hell is derived from repetition....heh.

  • Petra Creffield On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Petra Creffield (28)By person wrote:

    thanks for the feedback everyone, this is supposed to be quite trippy so am glad its working for some of you ta P

  • xserratedsoulx On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    anywhere, not changing anything, the horror of having written the same words, over nad over. this is a terrifying peice.

  • xserratedsoulx On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    wow. i am impressed. really. it seems so simple, the idea and all, but the dizzying repition, the trap of it, it echoes 'addiction' and all the things that go along with it, you capture the dizziness of repeating the same things nad not going anyw

  • A former member wrote: I am altering substances I am addicted to mood ;)

  • Rebel tiGer King On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Rebel tiGer King (258)By person wrote:

    my eyes hurt...i'll come bak to this later -symph-

  • Bella Butchery On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    blunt title and blunt material is a catalyst for a blunt response. unoriginal.

  • blue On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    o.O)) I am dizzy! fuck.

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