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Fading Moment
By ReddropX
Smile before you walk away
The beauty lasts till end of days
Moments fade before their time
I wish you’d stay for a little while
I’ll stare into your amber eyes
See your thoughts and where they lie
Like the sun that calls the night
And first stars that come to sight
Seeds born from dreams of gray
Never see the light of day
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© 2007 ReddropX
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On Sunday, October 31, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(177)
wrote:
This feels like a whisper- a sigh. so delicate, and innocent, but powerful. I like it.
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On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella
(185) wrote:
so lovely makes the heart sigh with contentment beautiful
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A former member wrote:
Very nice. I like love poems with a nostalgic romantic feel rather than all about sex and lust. Good job!
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A former member wrote:
Yeah, I haven't had a chance to check out your other stuff, but I like this one. -Stone-
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
nice -symph-
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On Thursday, June 28, 2007, Revisable Retina
(83) wrote:
hmmmm I like this makes up for a good little day dream : ) rach
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