Frozen Feelings
By vaultgrl
As I watch the shadows flutter across the room...
I’m gripped by a thought.
Maybe a feeling.
But who knows....I haven’t felt in so long.
Consuming as it is…I allow my self to hope.
Praying for a change....but he doesn’t come.
Another night....alone.
The fire on my face, trying to get warm.
But the warmth never comes.
Desolate and lonely, forever destined to be.
But don’t tell me, I’ll catch on in my own time.
Kind of like the tears.
Slowly and calmly as if they have a reason to exist, if only for a brief
moment, until wiped away by an even colder hand, they glide.
They glide along this icy cheek after slipping free of these hollow eyes.
Simply to freeze as they reach my purple lips.
If they even make it that far, before they are wiped from existence by
a hand that has been trying to get warm for too long, trying to feel for
too long, and wanting to be held for....
too long.
All I ask is that you lie to me and tell me it will all be okay....
Tell me it will all be better soon.....
And tell me that you care.....
But you won’t ever be here.....
And those things I shall never hear.
Comments on "Frozen Feelings"
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Images images images. Then the feeling that I kinda read this the way I wanted it to be read. Left enough room for the reader, for it to be somewhat familiar to most
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A former member wrote:
I won't tell you anything my dear...except that I am really impressed with how your writing has grown. This piece is a heart-stopper...absolutely amazing. Chin up though; not because it will be better but because we are more beautiful when we smile. ~L
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On Tuesday, April 4, 2006, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
thank you....smiles come scarcly these days, but when they do, they're treasured.......
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A former member wrote:
*throat..... sry for the caps
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A former member wrote:
......I've alwaysed waNTED TO KICK SOME ONE IN THE THROUGHT..... BUT NONE OF MY WORKS CAN ACTUALY REAC OUT AND GRAB YOU LKE THIS ONE
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
....thanks you muches Kurdt.....
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On Wednesday, March 15, 2006, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
......thank you all.....so so much.....
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On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
When I start feeling something, I'll give you a better comment than. This was a good write:)
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A former member wrote:
Wow. This was stunning. Feel like I've been kicked in the throat. Sadly written but written well. ~Ship!
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On Saturday, March 18, 2006, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
...sry to have kicked you in the throat..... :)
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On Monday, March 13, 2006, manywalks
(750) wrote:
You know, child, you just get better and better. ~ mw
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A former member wrote:
Another good one kid :)