Snow Day

By Nomad

A spirit fleshing out
mid-afternoon
Flashplayer anxieties
was also a snow-drift,
a child’s plaything,
an artist’s “ideal form,”
and an economist’s “involuntary labor stoppage.”

It crisped a drunkard’s pubic beard
to a sallow lettuce-leaf frost wake
and like evidence of tears.
His pistachio dick shriveled
plaster-pale as he
Unwept his burden in the alleyway.

There was no soul dared cry Wolf,
no cleverly argued redeeming
Proposition
to counter the dire howling of the wind
in its ethereal passing:

It felt like a ghost, a
Holy Ghost,
but it moved like
swarming.

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2004 Nomad
Published on Thursday, March 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Snow Day"

Log in to post comments.
  • capt_funguy On Saturday, May 19, 2007, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    staring at something refracted here ... as he throws up his innards through his eyes ... damn ... it's a shame you no longer post ... a damn shame - funguy

  • Solace On Wednesday, January 26, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    This was a brilliant depiction of a snow day, the children, the business men and the bum...excellent contrast and well expressed piece, par excellence

  • A former member wrote: "pistachio dick" LoL! this write is amazing!

  • purr_verse On Friday, March 5, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    i love the final stanza: almost tactile in its depiction of sensation... so cold, so cold... lovely. purr

  • ariadne On Thursday, March 4, 2004, ariadne (7)By person wrote:

    why does the holy ghost swarm so well, perfect depiction of the PLAGUE, thrown on the shapes amidst commerce, verrry nice

  • ariadne On Thursday, March 4, 2004, ariadne (7)By person wrote:

    "pubic beard"...gods wot a 'orrid thing!!!! nasty brilliant!!!!

Contribution Level

Nomad's Favorite Poets
Nomad's Favorite Works
Share/Save This Post



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]