GOTh TO FIT IN

By Twisted Vanity

OH MY GOD!
Is Morticia wearing pink?
Did that Prepy Boy just wink?
Dammit, I just dropped the last of my
Weed down the sink!
Look at me!!!
I'm not weak,
I've got 5 piercings- on each cheek!!!
I don't care what others think
OH MY GOD-
He said I stink!
I have to find a new kink-
I'm 13 and just reached my sexual peak!
that kid over there is such a freak!
Why do I hang out with all these geeks?

People like this make me think...

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Copyright 2003 Twisted Vanity
Published on Sunday, December 21, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • DoctorAsh On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    huh?

  • A former member wrote: This is quite amusing...made me laugh, and that never hurts...statement is a good thing...keep it up.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, December 22, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    You go girl! You are definetly my daughter...hehe heh so many feel they have to grow up SO fast...if only they knew what lies ahead for them they'd slow down! *Momma*

  • Drea On Sunday, December 21, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    i know people like this. this made me laugh only because it's true. again, well written ~Drea~

  • Twisted Vanity On Sunday, December 21, 2003, Twisted Vanity (13)By person wrote:

    Glad someone finds it amusing..thankies

  • Crying_Banshee On Sunday, December 21, 2003, Crying_Banshee (62)By person wrote:

    what's amusing in making fun of people?

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, February 2, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    It isn't making fun of ppl if you read it correctly, it is speaking of *sterotyping*..In other words, accept ppl for what they are, not what a *World, says you must be*

  • Drea On Sunday, December 21, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    its not making fun of people. its noticing how some people are. i dont see where its making fun of anyone.

  • Drea On Sunday, December 21, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    i said it made me laugh because i *know* people like that. i didnt say i made fun of them. they are my friends. you read too much into my comment ~Drea~

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