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Dam You
By Broken Rose
Dam this dam that,
ive had enough of this bloody crap.
Stuff you stuff him,
the whole world is full of sins.
Go cry go die,
see if I care you worthless fly.
I'm done enough,
im so sick of acting tuff.
Go cut go burn,
I dont care anymore you worthless worm.
You deserve it you see,
for what you did to me.
You're name rhymes with flee,
its funny cause thats what you are and it brings me glee.
So dam you for hurting me,
dam you for cheating,
dam you for using,
and dam you for not truly loving me.
But most of all......
dam me for not seeing what you really are you pathetic worm......
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Copyright 2015 Broken Rose
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On Monday, May 30, 2016, Glass eyes
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wrote:
such anger that flows throughout this poem, its relatable and very understanding. Good job though that you realized that he was a waste of space, atleast now you can move on and forget about the pathetic worm! You go girl keep up the good poetry
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A former member wrote:
I really love the meter of this poem, especially in the first few verses. It fits well with the anger.
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A former member wrote:
I can relate to this so much. I love the expression of the anger and rage. I felt like you were telling my tale, except mine doesn't rhyme with "Flea" :)
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A former member wrote:
To let out your anger into words is a great way to get rid of unwanted stress. I'm glad to see that you're able to direct it fluently into your words and phrases. I hope the idiot finally gets what he deserves.. No one deserves to be cheated on and used. True love is precious.. Once you find it, do your best to not let go, as I'm certain that whoever the person is, if they are able to treat you like their goddess, they'll always be yours. You have a voice that deserves to be heard, so let it be heard.
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On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Shikiryu
(70) wrote:
Ordinarily I don't pay any mind to poems that aren't freeverse but this was unbelievably wonderful. Your anger, frustration and rage echoed through this.Beautifully done.
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