the years between.

By eidos





second hands make the minutes you are gone
seem like hours, compared to to the days you were here.
and the months until I see you again.






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Copyright 2013 eidos
Published on Wednesday, January 9, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I've been reading through your works...they feel like flash cards, about life, and loss, and heart (or lack of it). It's brilliant. Thank you.

  • Nehema On Friday, January 18, 2013, Nehema (959)By person wrote:

    Time does fly when you're having fun and crawls when you're not. Time traveling back to a time we enjoyed is one of life's little pleasures, however there is a cost of losing the time and experience of now. Relaying sentiment however is never a waste of anyone's time - XXOO Scholar

  • Poetic-Realm On Wednesday, January 9, 2013, Poetic-Realm (258)By person wrote:

    Simply put: that secondhand breaking and falling, getting stuck in the glass of the clock, crawling with sneaky bugs that got in but cant get out.... stops everything that was and eliminate futures. I feel ya.

  • PoetessDarkly On Wednesday, January 9, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    awesome epic poetic write, sometimes it only takes a few words to say someone is missed.

  • A former member wrote: missing someone can be hell. i think it was well said with these few words.

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