Comments by Six-Out
- "This one had a fractured feel to it. Like there were cracks in the surface, barely letting us see what's hidden underneath. Write more, let us see what's there."
Posted by Six-Out on "hourglass" by Meshell
- "The style of writing Ian's the subtle rhyme scheme is odd, but not bad. I like the way it flowed with a studder, almost like someone in the situation trying to quietly speak it out. This is a good piece."
Posted by Six-Out on "Mindsweeper" by Meshell
