Comments by Grim_Sorrow
- "I love the image this work portrays... also, impressive in the fact that the subject matter is so easy to relate too. Who hasn't at one point pondered loves manifestation and when they too would feel its grasp. keep writing ."
Posted by Grim_Sorrow on "Amongst the Flowers" by Rhys Ki
- "Once again... good but the end doesnt keep up with the rest of the work, it loses it's rhythm. Take your time and wait for the right words, I have atleast 30 works without an ending, every day I'll go back and add what I can. Keep it up, you've got tallen"
Posted by Grim_Sorrow on "Hearts Holding Hands ; Inside Out" by Rhys Ki
- "The premise is good, and it starts off quite well but it seems to lose its rhythm abruptly towards the end, if you could only smooth the transition,just my opinion, but all in all I'd say you have great potential and I look forward to future works. "
Posted by Grim_Sorrow on "Heartless, Ceaseless" by Rhys Ki
