Comments by Dei

  • "Beautiful tribute. I love this. What's interesting is the reference to "brother". Could be perceived in more than one way. Were you speaking in the spiritual sense? Actually made me imagine the twin brother that passed away. If he had lived, would they have sang together? mirror images of eachother. swinging hips x two. Or perhaps the tragedy of losing his twin is what made his lip quiver and his voice echo with tragedy even while he smiled. "
    Posted by Dei on "Elvis & heartbreak" by FadedBlues
  • "Ah.. I see. I liked this. I liked the simplicity of the narrative married with the heaviness of the subject. This is pleasently and sadly relatable "
    Posted by Dei on "the bread we wouldn't eat" by FadedBlues
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