Comments by syzygy

  • "This is very sad to me. It whispers needs unmet. In my mind it sounds like years of wishing for a release that never came, all a man's dreams turned to dust foremost for a woman's pleasing. Guess that's cause my parents were like that and honestly when they divorced it made me happy. Maybe there's only one life. Makes me think of the movie American Beauty. How he broke out and got free. This meant a lot to me."
    Posted by syzygy on "Iconoclast II" by dwells
  • "I like the way you pay attention to the way the words sound together just as much as the meaning. "I wept them-slowly", what a rare line, wrapped in emotion and all that people think they might see...and all that really lies beneath."
    Posted by syzygy on "Bone Wreath" by Abberant
  • "The hardest part about being an empath is finding where others end and we begin. It's so fluid that sometimes we can't even tell that we're absorbing another. This does well to express all the facets of what it means for us, the great cost we pay. I like the way it ends, because every single last bit of what we are is true, and that is what is most misunderstood."
    Posted by syzygy on "Empath" by Nehema
  • "Most mokume I've seen is jewelry. I've often thought about the future of jewelry as micro scenes. For instance, if this were shrunk down exactly as it is. Upon its creation the creator gives you a looking glass, and you memorize in detail every flux and fold. When someone else looked at it they wouldn't be able to see everything, and only you would know its true face. And if were a common thing, wouldn't it be nice for some kind someone to carry with them a looking glass, which they used to observe closely a stranger's micro art? Someone who really wanted to know the details. It would separate them from the rest. I would have this Metamorphosis on my arm and underneath a sleeve so that no one would know about it but me."
    Posted by syzygy on "Mokume Morphosis" by Feral
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