Comments by blue
- "I have read this two ways: firstly, what a beautiful sentiment you have created here (if I am reading this correctly) ...a confession, a declaration to the other, to love, the completion of ones self through the recognition that the 'being' of you exists through and within another... and secondly, more on my own personal viewing, I see this as an embracing of ones completeness, after a long and intensive journey to the heart of ones true being, the pieces have finally been unified, or perhaps the unessentials have been hacked away until the true form has been revealed, and set free to simply be, to exist in the present moment without clinging to the past or reaching for the future...... a pure and unobstructed movement through the now. Simple and brilliant. I love it. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Out of hiding " by sixsixnine
- "Ha, just as good the second time. Fine writing here. ~b"
Posted by blue on "#2" by sixsixnine
- "Wrong? Quite right. "Is it making us dream,
of rainbow slides on soft clouds?" Loved that line above all here written. Especially too the lanslide of verbalized emotions ending in such a provocative and literally poignant question: "We all want what we desire,
but will we retrieve it from the fire?" These cut to the bone perspectives may be what we all need these days. This was truly enjoyed, thank you. ~b
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Posted by blue on "#2" by sixsixnine
- "welly well, I myself do not enjoy rhyme much, but I did like this! Big win for you. Cheers. ~b"
Posted by blue on "worm" by sixsixnine
