"haha! Now here, in such penetrating verse do I smile. Loved, yes, loved the ending I did. Rock. ~b" Posted by blue on "To The Infected," by Kaleidoscope_Heart
"ouch, incisively effective.. my only suggestion, change pious to piety, I think that is the correct usage. Oh, and pety is petty*. oop. Well played, welcome to DP. ~b" Posted by blue on "Serpents to Snakes" by Kaleidoscope_Heart
