Comments by Queazenart

  • "This is a nice flowing piece. It's got heavy subject matter, but it feels delicate to me. There's something settling about it, which may be a bit ironic XD idk I like it, though."
    Posted by Queazenart on "Looks good from my house" by Rag-a-muffin
  • "It's probably the coffee talking, but I found this to be a frantic piece to read. Something about it seems urgent. The syllable count for each line throws me off, but that's really just a personal problem for me and not something wrong with your writing. Anyways, nice piece. I encourage more (assuming the signature at the end is your own). "
    Posted by Queazenart on "Frames" by Rag-a-muffin
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