Frames

By Rag-a-muffin

Daily dreams of mental escape
A metamorphosis of prior state
Trapped in the gravity of your distaste
Hopelessly clawing at a further date
Dont mimic me and take the bait
A selfless mind that you cant negateĀ 
The cover charge is a common rape
In frames of mind that dissociate
-VW

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Copyright 2016 Rag-a-muffin
Published on Tuesday, October 4, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I felt a tone of frustration and anger in this poem which I enjoyed. It felt raw and real and I enjoyed it. Well done!

  • Queazenart On Wednesday, October 5, 2016, Queazenart (212)By person wrote:

    It's probably the coffee talking, but I found this to be a frantic piece to read. Something about it seems urgent. The syllable count for each line throws me off, but that's really just a personal problem for me and not something wrong with your writing. Anyways, nice piece. I encourage more (assuming the signature at the end is your own).

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