Looks good from my house

By Rag-a-muffin

Eclipsing in nature
Transfixed on the plot
Hearing what i want to believe
But knowing that i cannot

Stuck in this intertia
Like quietly falling down
My demons are soft spoken
But coerse me to the ground..
-VW

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Copyright 2016 Rag-a-muffin
Published on Tuesday, October 4, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Queazenart On Wednesday, October 5, 2016, Queazenart (212)By person wrote:

    This is a nice flowing piece. It's got heavy subject matter, but it feels delicate to me. There's something settling about it, which may be a bit ironic XD idk I like it, though.

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