Comments by Queazenart
- "Ending three lines with "see" in such close proximity drives me crazy. The whole middle section of this piece seems under cooked and don't do that much for the narrative/metaphor of the poem. Sorry to be a critic :/"
Posted by Queazenart on "Soul in Turmoil" by felicity0444
- "The "alone forever" tag should have beend "forever alone" just for the irony XD. But for real, I liked this. The first half is premium sadness. It's very much in the vein of what I've been feeling and trying to write recently."
Posted by Queazenart on "Alone" by felicity0444
