Comments by BeautifulCalamity
- "loved, absolutely LOVED the fourth stanza. . but there was so much more to this, the quote at the end. . and the line "and he smiled" said so much in general. the acid stench.. burning flesh.. every words paints a picture, an honest piece. . a great write"
Posted by BeautifulCalamity on "And he smiled" by Alacer_Cogitatus